artful words

Track changes

The image shows the same two paragraphs marked up in track changes. Words that have been added or changed appear in green with underlining. Deleted words are indicated in boxes in the right-hand margin. Some of the words in the paragraphs are highlighted in blue. They are attached to blue boxes in the right-hand margin that contain comments. One example of a comment is "You may wish to soften this verb. Perhaps 'requires' rather than 'demands'."

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